First Journey
Oh! It’s all so scary. Save me God! Please. I can’t bear this ordeal. I am happy where I am. Why do they want to take me out?
Now they’re pulling my head with something. It hurts badly. Please let go!
They think they should help me. That I’m stuck inside, drenched in fluids and darkness all around me.
No!! I don’t ever feel sad in here. Never did. That’s my small home. Only mine. My mom’s womb. I feel very safe here. I get food. I feel warm and hugged.
I again feel like crying. I fear so much. Where are they taking me? Such bright light! Strange sounds I can very faintly hear! What would it be like on the other end? Help me God! Don’t take me away from my mom! I will die.
©Alka 2016
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Written for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers that is hosted by Priceless Joy, and inspired by this week’s above photo prompt.
It/he/she will not die, as that is what we call ‘life’.
Is this piece a bit exaggerated? Probably 🙂 Who knows what birthing bubs feel! May be some discomfort as their senses are not fully developed yet.
Reblogged this on theakdwivedi.
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Thanks for the share!
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Poor tyke. Possibly feels harassed! Good one 🙂
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Thanks! I suppose a baby about to be born does feel the stress 🙂
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Poor baby doesn’t want to be born! Possibly how all newborns feel during the birth process? Great story, Alka!
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Thanks Joy! The only life a fully developed foetus has ever seen is inside his/her mother. Being shaken out of one’s familiar zone and exposure to so much new would be stressful. If we think of it, we all were like that once but do not remember 🙂
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Very true Alka! It’s probably a good thing we don’t remember that birth process!
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In this day and time…the child certainly has a valid reason for being scared to arrive! I hope that fear will change to delight so there will be no fright.
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Very valid reason as life is so unpredictable in current times. Generally, after their initial crying, most babies do find delight in early childhood, but thereafter life is a learning process…a roller coaster ride.
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Alka, your creativity is growing. No need to worry if this is overstated. It’s yours, and you can do with it as you like. I think it’s a fascinating concept.
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Thanks Linda! I agree. A creation is a puppet in a creator’s hands. Moreover, at times we need more words to convey the point. I may elaborate on this concept at some stage.
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I am sure the little one too undergoes a lot of trauma – great take on the prompt 🙂
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Trauma – that’s for sure! Rather we adults are not sure the little ones are happy to get out of it or wanted to stay in, or else just confused and trembling as they are 🙂
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Am sure happiest inside 🙂
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Something seemed so real about the situation you described, the child’s thoughts were completely justified..good job..
Shreyans
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Thanks Shreyans! We can only imagine how it must feel. A total change from its place of conception.
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Kinda sums it all up in a nice, neat package. Well done.
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Thank you Joe! ‘Nice neat package’…I like the way you summed up my post.
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very great blogging
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Thank you! Feel free to give suggestions.
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I like you blogging all the time
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thanks to share you great blogging
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Thanks!
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I wish you all the best in out of stress , take care !
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What a very clever concept Alka! I loved the style of this too. Great Post. KL ❤
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Beautiful lines. So touching too!
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